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Your friend has booked a holiday for both of you. However, you are not happy with the hotel arrangements and want to change them. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter, mention: How excited you are for this holiday with him/her Why are you not happy with the hotel? Which alternatives would you prefer?

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Dear Sunitha, I'm so excited awaiting our holidays. I remember the
last
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 meeting when you told me about your plans for a trip with me. I am really surprised
with
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 your coordination and planning ability. When I received your call, I was overwhelmed with joy.
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, being an adventure enthusiast, it was my long-time dream to visit Kullu and Manali. I'm very thankful to you for choosing
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 a wonderful paradise on Earth. I got the itinerary send by you through the mail. I am so happy that we are staying there for 6 nights and 1 day. But, sorry to say, I'm not happy with the lodging you have booked for us. I wanted to have a room with a balcony having a mountain view plus dining.
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, I prefer the tavern should be in equal/almost near distance from our destinations places. So that, without wasting time we can explore the whole
Himachal
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of Himachal
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 Pradesh.
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, while checking with one of my friends, the
hotel
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 which you booked have some negative reviews and
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is far from our destination spots. I have googled for more information and found a
hotel
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 named Sun Park
Hotel
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, Manali. More than a
hotel
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, it is a resort.So we can have some fun time together by playing games and swimming indoor pools. They have their own spa facilities, which will help us to relax from our tiring day roams.
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, the most beautiful part is, it
a
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resort area with views of the Himalayas. Please consider my suggestion and change the plans
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accordingly
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.
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, it should be remembered that you will have to obtain a special permit for visiting Rohtang Pass- our
3rd day
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 destination. Looking forward
for
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 your reply and convey my regards to your parents. Yours lovingly, Sadika

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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