Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

The performance of thrilling sports has become widespread among the global population, which is considered to impose a threat to people's lives. Various reasons have been put forward to explain for the surge of the trend and I am in

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promote over another

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of those who advocate

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positive new trend. In my views of point, there are 2

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question.

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, as can be seen, it is an addictive of

adrenaline which

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adrenaline, which

can be

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perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight

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as the most addictive drugs

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as cocaine.

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, in a film that I was seen for a month, that a man who addicted to climbing on the façade of

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the highest

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building in New York and he climb all high new buildings. The highest building in Malaysia called Twin

Towers which

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Towers, which

he had climbed

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2 times. As you know, it is addicted so if he was far away from that kind of activities, he

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sweating and can’t do anything.

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is problems that people have to face push them to do these extreme things since in their lives they trying to go through some serious hardships that's why getting closer to the death make them forget about the problems and they see these utmost activities as a relief. When it comes to the talk about whether it is a good idea doing intense activities or not, I think it is

challenging but

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challenging, but

horrible either to the people who don’t want to meet Grim Ripper. It is hard to believe in man who ensure about the well-equipped equipment due to the death of many people on the TV about the new kind of that

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. Nowadays, it is considered so you can try to that

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a point located with respect to surface features of some region

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once, but

I don’t recommend you to that.