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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.

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According to some people organizing things and put them in their exact place is important and useful. It seems to me that, it is true for most things, not everything. The fact is that, the neat and tidy home and workplace will make us have fresh feel every moment.
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Moreover, if
 things are not kept in their clear place, we will have to waste a lot of time looking for them.
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, there are many people can describe at least one case when they had to spend hours searching for their keys or wallet.
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, if important financial and necessary health documents are not kept clear district, the consequences can be disastrous. Obviously there are several advantages to keeping things organised.
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, not everything has to be kept in its exact situation at all times.Actually, when it comes to things we use frequently, keeping them in a situation where we can find them easily is more important than keeping them in their exact position.
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, when I want to make several sketching before starting the design, I will need pencil and some markers, so because of that, during the design’s time I leave them
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 to my papers on the table till to finish the design. To summarize, I believe that it is most important to keep things organized, because organization makes it easy to find them.
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However certain
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However, certain
 things that we use often do not have to be in their good seat at all time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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