With this letter, I am extremely glad to provide my highest possible reference for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey Gebru in support of his application to your prestigious university/Institute Master Program Scholarship.

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I am Anupam Chatterjee, my NOHA application number is 347. I am writing to appeal to the reconsideration of my current
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status.
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are very important to continue my education. I would sincerely like to explain the key reasons why I rightfully deserve
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academic
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. In the online admission form, I already mentioned that I have been intentionally engaged with a social welfare society since 2016 and I
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, I cannot reasonably afford it because EUR is very stronger than INR.
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