In schools and universities girls tend use arts while boys like science.What are the reasons for this trend? And do you think this tendency should be changed?

Schools and universities are the
hotspots
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hot spots
of radical ideas which stir the enthusiastic minds.There is a popular saying that 'mould in school
fly
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flies
in colleges'.Anyway the topic is apt to the current condition of
or
of or belonging to us
our
common educational premises.
In
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During
the teenage period children like to do
activites
any specific behavior
activities
that are quickly
noticable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
.So girls who are passionate in their skills are more like to perform because it is more appealing to public.
Boys on
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Boys, on
other hand they
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the other hand, they
the other hand they
have a truth seeking mind, loves to do activities which satisfy their hunger for to do more. Now we can get deep
in to
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into
the subject.We ask the question why?I must say why not!The minds of young ones are not like
old ones
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the old ones
,
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,
the difference is they are less
cautios
showing careful forethought
cautious
about the outcome.But in the case of ladies
,
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,
they like to express themselves to public and little cautious about
outcome
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the outcome
outcomes
than
gents
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the gents
.So they spend more time on decorating themselves and have a keen understanding of their dress selection.
This
make
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makes
them suitable for art works which you may find compelling to recognize.Let me elaborate
,
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,
girls are more like to get
in
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into
more details they
are not get
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are not getting
don't get
do not get
bored by doing these types of
activites
any specific behavior
activities
,
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,
it is like they are
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
it like a passion.Which makes them suitable for learning difficult things like learning to play musical instruments
,
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,
craft works
,
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,
drawing and the related activities.By doing these types of
activites
any specific behavior
activities
which they find it fun to do, they
also
get a chance to express themselves to
audience
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the audience
audiences
an audience
about their talents. In the case of boys as I already noted
above they
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above, they
are not very keen to details rather, they are more
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
activites
any specific behavior
activities
that
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the mind which have "seek the truth and find the
solutins
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
solution
through experiments" as a major aim.They usually get bored by
activites
any specific behavior
activities
that require patience and time,
also
they may not very interested in appearing before the public as a performer, but not the case of all.Eventually they put their thought in scientific activities and some
in
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of
sports activities
,
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,
thats
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that's
their entertainment. I like to conclude
this
by saying that I agree with the topic by considering the facts which I have pointed out in
above paragraphs
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the above paragraphs
.Girls are like to express themselves and want to have attention from others and they are very much interested in getting
in to
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into
details of a particular activity on the
otherhand
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other hand
boys
are
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is
more like to do more
,
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,
such
as they are not interested in time consuming activities but they are more
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
result oriented activities.

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