Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking situation at work. In your letter, you should: describe the problems are explain why should solve the problems suggest how to solve the issues.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regard to the lack of parking space available for the company's
employees
and the inconvenience caused by it. Since most of the
employees
commute through their private vehicles, there has been a shortage of parking space on the company's premises. While the
next
parking space is available at an extremely far distance, most of us have to travel again through cabs or auto to reach back at the office.
Additionally
, the area is unsafe, and because of the lack of security, our cars and bike have been damaged.
For instance
, yesterday, one of my colleagues,
Mr.
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Mr
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Shahid, was mentioning about his vehicle which got towed
last
week, and
also
the expense, he had to bear was enormous.
However
, even if we commute through an alternate mode of transportation, it turns out to be expensive and time-consuming. Because of
this
, we are not able to arrive at the office on time.
In addition
to
this
, the constant trepidation due to the shoddy parking area lowers our concentration at work.
Moreover
, it is practically unsafe for female
employees
to commute at night if they don't have a personal vehicle. If I may, I have a few suggestions,
for example
, increasing the number of parking allowance for the company's
employees
.
Furthermore
, a security guard allotted in the parking area would be very thoughtful. I kindly request you to resolve
this
matter and take action favourably. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Shakib Qureshi
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parking conflicts
  • insufficient parking
  • limited parking spaces
  • tardiness
  • security concerns
  • vehicle safety
  • workplace morale
  • employee satisfaction
  • rotating parking schedule
  • feasible solutions
  • remote parking location
  • carpool system
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