Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer weekend markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

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of activities at

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Floating Market.

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of reasons why we like

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of Fireflies that you can only

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of beautiful

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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