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Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer weekend markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

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It is often said that Nakhon Pathom Walking
street
 a lot of things to buy. One
such
 example is that we can buy clothes
such
 as short jeans, secondhand
t-shirt
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirt
, sport clothes, baby clothes, vintage
t-shirt
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirt
 and pet clothes.
Also
, we can buy foods
such
 as fried chicken, boat noodles, omelet rice, rice noodles, fried meatballs, and seafood salad.
Besides
, we can accessories
such
 as black glasses, red cap, cool socks,
hand made
made by hand or a hand process
handmade
 scarf and boxer shorts. One of the most striking features is that we can do a lot of activities
at
Suggestion
on
 Nakhon Pathom Walking
street
.
That is
 to say, we can sale goods
such
 as pet foods, Thai fruits, Thai desserts, old furniture and coconut smoothies. Later, we can take photos of
street
 foods, girlfriend, best friends and me. It is a well-know fact that there are a lot of reasons why we like Nakhon Pathom Walking
street
. One
instance could
Accept comma addition
instance, could
 be it’s a place can have spend time with my family on the weekends. Apart from
this
, cheap goods.
Finally
, there are many delicious
food
Suggestion
foods
.
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