Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer weekend markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

It is often said that Sai Tai Center Market has a lot of things to shop / buy. One
such
example is that we can buy shoes
such
as New Balance Fresh Foam 574S, 2.0 Peach, Nike Air Max 270 React, ADIDAS Questar, Converse All Star, Vans Old Skool, PUMA Carina Leather and ONITSUKA Mexico 66.
Also
, we can buy accessories
such
as Plastic shoe box, Shoe push, Insole, Shoelace, socks and Shoe pads.
Besides
, we can buy animals
such
as Beagle dog, Scottish Fold Cat, Holland Lop rabbit, Silkiy Chicken, duck, bird and Gold Fish. One of the most striking features is that we can do
lot
Suggestion
lots
of activities at
Sai
Suggestion
Sin
Sea
Tai Center Market.
That is
to say, we can take photos of many people, traffic jam, natural background, junk
/
street foods, beautiful vendors, handsome
/
cute boys
/
guys, animals, and modern temple. Later, we can eat a lot of foods
such
as yummy Fast Foods, Seafood, Pork hamburger, Saba Fish Sushi, Beef BBQ and Fried chicken.
Additionally
, we can do exercises
such
as doing aerobics, singing, jogging, running, walking, playing skateboarding, bicycling, and dancing.
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