The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
The table below demonstrates the data about rail transportation across Malaysia,
Canada
, Use synonyms
China
and the Use synonyms
UAE
in the year Use synonyms
of
2007.
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Overall
, the Chinese were the largest users of the railways, Linking Words
whereas
Canadians hardly used Linking Words
this
mode of transport. Linking Words
However
, the usage of the rail network for Linking Words
cargo
was the highest in Use synonyms
Canada
. Malaysia and the Use synonyms
UAE
had almost similar figures.
Focusing on Use synonyms
China
and Use synonyms
Canada
, railways were quite popular among the people of Use synonyms
China
with about 27% of them using it, which is about ninety times higher than that of Use synonyms
Canada
. The average distance travelled by a citizen of the former was 1980 kilometres, Use synonyms
whereas
the latter had only around 80 kilometres per head. Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
Canada
was the largest user of rail for the transportation of Use synonyms
cargo
with 2820 billion tons of material transported using Use synonyms
this
network, a whopping Linking Words
approximate
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approximately
of
125% more than Change preposition
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China
.
With regards to Malaysia and the Use synonyms
UAE
, their numbers were almost the same with about 5.9% and 5.5% of the population respectively using trains for transport. In terms of Use synonyms
cargo
, the Use synonyms
UAE
used trains to transport only 21.9 billion tons of Use synonyms
cargo
, which is the lowest among all the countries compared.Use synonyms
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