Health sector in the world is in the path of tremendous progress however, a pandemic or wide spreading diseases can block the pace of the advancement. How it may affect countries in its social and economic development and what are the consequences it can bring into the world.

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of great significance or value
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so if any pandemic or spreading of infectious diseases can be
adversly
in an adverse manner
adversely
affect
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affected
affecting
the development process in
social and economic process
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the social and economic process
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working
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the action of accomplishing something
achievement
achievements
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sectors, mainly
sectors mainly
doctors
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nurses
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scientist
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and so on..So if any pandemics
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occur
in the globe that will
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lead
to the
imbalancing
a lack of balance or state of disequilibrium
unbalancing
of whole sectors not only in health but
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instance, if
any deadly illness
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occurs
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The government
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bring into being
initiate
the preventive measures and
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invest some fund
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in
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sector
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further
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may cause
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economic
crisis in some extent.
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infectious diseases, it
infectious diseases it
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a limited time period
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brings
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lives
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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