Today consumers are facing an increasing amount of advertising from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

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Many people believe that advertisements will influence our daily life while nowadays businessmen not only invest promotions on the televisions but
also
invest
on
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in
social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
.
Althought
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Although
the
first
reaction to some people is to oppose
such
claims.
Nonetheless
, from my points of views, there are several persuasive reasons to agree with
this
statement. In the following paragraphs, there are a number of perspectives to examine
this
issue more in depth. The main
reaosn
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
to support my position is that advertisements have
maigic
any art that invokes supernatural powers
magic
magical
power to influence people. Take my friend, Tina,
for example
, she was not interested in any online game.
However
,
last
year she found out a promotion of a type of games on
facebook
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Facebook
. She started to spend
whole day
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a whole day
the whole day
to play and she
even doesn't go
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doesn't even go
to school now. From
such
examples, it demonstrates that we are easily affected by the promotions. Another reason for my belief is that the advertisements are trying to change our living
stlyes
how something is done or how it happens
styles
so that they could make profits for themselves.
For instance
, my sister, Jane, she had been a vegetarian for more than 10 years.
However
, she kept seeing a
groups
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group
of pictures on Facebook that showing burgers, steaks, and fried chickens.
Hence
, she
quites
on equal terms by payment or requital
quits
cites
quotes
for being a vegetarian.
Consequently
, it can be said that people's diets could be
also
changed through companies' marketing investments. To conclude, it is not to say that other points of views
is
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are
totally no merits.
Nevertheless
, the reasons I have presented can support the position of advertisements are influencing civilians.
Therefore
, if we want to protect us from these marketing plans, we need to know our wills well. By that way, we could avoid the challenges of the competing companies.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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