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Throughout history, male leaders have led us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There is an opinion, were it not for male leadership, some wars, as well as aggressive external and internal politics, would be avoided. I disagree, that being managed by women, countries have more chances to escape conflicts both inside and outside their boundaries
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internal/external).
Firstly
, women are prone to overly emotional actions, which may lead to undesirable consequences.
Secondly
, mercilessness and violence often do not come from the ruler but from
society
. Scientists have proven, that women tend to be impulsive, while
men
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the men
 keep their mind cold and rely on their rational thinking. Making rash decisions, women may involve their countries in a serious confrontation, while the key to success may
be in reflecting
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be reflecting
 upon the problems and finding a compromise. A vivid example was Abraham
Lincoln whose
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Lincoln, whose
 ability to critical thinking made him a great president.
However
, a gender of governors does not determine
safety
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the safety
 and welfare of their nations. There have been enough examples in history when countries were led by both women and men whose cruelty and ruthlessness immersed their lands into bloody wars. And the point was not only in the severity of the ruler, but
also
in
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on
 the severity of that time and
society
. It can be exemplified by the Middle Ages, which are considered the most ruthless era of mankind... From my perspective, preserving the state of peace in a country depends not only on balanced and deliberate decisions
of
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by
 the governor, but to a greater extend on healthy and adequate
society
, that wants to work for the good of their country and make it prosperous, and both women and men can succeed in creating
such
 a
society
 equally.

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