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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

#world #image #photograph #film #word
Nowadays, it is being assumed by the people that pictures are more significant as compared to describe the emotions to someone through writing the words and these practices are in trend. I completely agree with
this
 statement and the
followings
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following
 facts will support my view properly. It is a privilege to all the uneducated or less educated
people who
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people, who
, do not know how to show grief or gratitude through messages. So, they always give priority to record their visual message and send to the concerned person.
Moreover
, it will favour to those who commit lots of error while
writing which
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writing, which
, sometime convey a wrong message to the receiver. To illustrate with the help of
gestures someone
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gestures, someone
 can express their mood to others so, that they can avoid violence.
Hence
,
this
 is very helpful to make the human relations strong. It is a time saving activity which, cannot demand any particular set of periods rather people can click pictures at anywhere, anytime which, can divert towards some other important tasks.
In addition
, it helps the people to become familiar with technology and make the nation
digitalized
put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalised
.
For example
, as per
survey report
Suggestion
the survey report
 with the existence of video call the demand of writing pads has become fall from 20% to 50% which helps to secure natural resources of an economy.
Therefore
,
this
 kind of change can help to do paperless work
with
Suggestion
to
 maintain electronic records. Conclusively, movies, snaps and other pictorial forms make the human life easier as compared to
ancient time
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ancient times
an ancient time
the ancient time
 when people used to write a letter for informing the precious and sad movements to their relatives and friends.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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