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How do the two pie charts illustrate the proportion of industrial contribution of factors to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.?

How do the two pie charts illustrate the proportion of industrial contribution of factors to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.?
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of
industrial
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 contribution of factors to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
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 the beginning, agriculture took up the largest percentage of the contribution to the Turkish economy
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 construction contributed just a small proportion.
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 the end, healthcare and education became the largest economic sector and finance, business and other contribute the least to the economy. Construction accounted for only 3% of the total contribution
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 rose to 10% in the period of 16 years. Correspondingly, manufacturing increased by 4%. IN 200, trade, utilities and
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transportation
 made up 14%
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 slightly reach one-fifth in 2016. Equally, finance, business and other experienced
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 nearly 10%. Agriculture witnessed a drop
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exact
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 one-tenth between 2000 and 2016. Following the downward trend,
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 income from government and leisure and hospitality both decreased by 3% after the period.
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, healthcare and education remained constant at 17%.

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