Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Young one’s are always seen as the future of any nation and depending on
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few people think that after their school they should go to university for
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studies and other remaining are of the v
iew point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
that they must work as car mechanics or builders etc. t
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serve
society
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.
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topic is very debatable keeping in mind different scenarios. Going to a university is a dream of everyone as it o
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opens
many doors of opportunities.
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why few people of our
society
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are of the m
ind set
a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations
mindset
that one must always opt for
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education rather than opting a
job
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after your schooling. Educated and k
nowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
people in our
society
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l
eads
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lead
to a better future and through
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only we can get upcoming doctors, lawyers, engineers and so on.
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of
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our
society
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will have talented people in different fields around us who are going to be a motivation for coming generations.
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,
on the other h
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and if
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hand, if
talk about the people who think that doing a
job
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after the school is better than opting to go to university for
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studies. The main reason o
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for
thinking
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way is that lack of employment opportunities.
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, even if someone gets a
job
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he or she is not paid according to the pay scale set by the authorities f
or
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in
that particular post. And
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influences them to opt for odd jobs like of a car mechanic or a builder which will in a way help the
society
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as well as meet their daily expenses. In conclusion, I will say that it depends on the thinking of a person that whether he wants to opt for an easy
job
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or would go for
further
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studies to get his dream
job
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. And in my o
pinion one
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opinion, one
must always chase his or her dream which will lead to a better future rather than giving up on an early stage.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • higher education
  • vocational training
  • skillset
  • employment landscape
  • economic contributions
  • hands-on experience
  • critical thinking skills
  • practical knowledge
  • tuition fees
  • trade professions
  • essential workforce
  • academic qualifications
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