All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric car should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Excessive amount of burning crude oil results
threating
pose a threat to; present a danger to
threaten
threatening
to the overall lives on earth.
Concering
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Concerning
issues I completely agree with
this
notion as petrol-diesel vehicles
must be remove
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must be removed
must remove
from our daily routines and push up eco-friendly and beneficiary electric vehicle on
road
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the road
. Emphatically, over
th
definite article
the
past two decades uses of gasoline
fuel
crossed the safe line of nature and made
dreadful situation
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the dreadful situation
to
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for
all of us.Number of personal vehicles are running on the road ceaselessly, despite
effects
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the effects
of burning natural
non renewable
that can not be renewed
nonrenewable
fuels.
Obivious graph
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An obvious graph
Obvious graph
of pollution and
fuel
sources boths
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sources, both
sources both
are drastically showing red alert.
For example
, medical research stated that 70% patients are suffering from breathing issues.
In addition
, vehicle evokes harmful carbon monoxide and sulphur dioxide, which is extremely dreadful to the healths. Because of these
temperature
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temperatures
of the earth has been rising gradually and disturbing balance of nature.
Hence
government
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the government
should be banned gasoline
fuel
vehicles and encourage people
for
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in
the alternate electric vehicle.
Secondly
, electric vehicles
plays
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play
pivotal role keeping environment safe and clean, in other word free from pollution. Not only
such
type of vehicles contributing free from air and sound
pollution but
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pollution, but
also
conserve nature and keep safe planet.
For instance
, quarterly magazine released
fasinatimg
news
,
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,
Some politicians took initiatives launching electric project in rural and urban area.
Likewise
, government authorities should one step towards
fuel
free
vehicles creating
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vehicles, creating
awareness among people.
Variety
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Varying
Varied
types of progress must arrange in schools and colleges.
Indeed it
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Indeed, it
may require to curb the situation under
control but
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control, but
certainly one day society adopt electric technology after realising
benefits
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the benefits
of
its
the thing named or in question
it
. To wrap up, saving
environment
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the environment
for the coming generation and to live healthy lifestyle we have to extract gasoline
fuel
vehicles from our life and give space for the advanced electric
vehicles
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vehicle
technology for the best results.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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