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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •say where you think you left the paper •explain why they are so important •tell the mamager what you want him/her to do

#hotel #home #papers #manager #•say #paper #•explain #•tell #mamager
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am
haruki
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Haruki
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 who recently attended a meeting at your hotel and I just realise that I left some important
paper
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papers
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 at the hotel. I am pretty sure that I left that paper
at
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in
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the 2nd
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2nd floor
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2nd-floor
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 male bathroom. I
ised
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used
is
 there while the meeting and I guess I put them
next
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 to the sink when
i
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 needed to wash my hands.
This
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 paper
are
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 so important to me because there are some secrets of the company on there and I am going to need them for another meeting which will be held in a few weeks. I really would like you to give me a help. Can you please send one of the
hotelan
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hotel
hotel and
 to check that bathroom and if they will find my papers, please post those to me. If you can find my office address, please put that as
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receiver
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the reciever
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 address. If not please contact me as soon as possible. Thank you for your help
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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