The graph shows average CO2 emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.

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The given line graph illustrates carbon dioxide

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per head in four different European countries from 1967 to 2007. In general, we can see that carbon dioxide

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were noticed the most in Great Britain in 1967.

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, CO2

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polluted the environment the least in Portugal in 1967. (were a cause

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pollution

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/ contributed to

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/ caused

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). What’s more important, Great Britain and Portugal remained at their highest and lowest positions respectively in terms of CO2

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over the span of 40 years. Starting (Beginning / To start) with the UK, we can view that

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in 1967 Carbon dioxide

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were 11 metric

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afterward

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this

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huge number decreased gradually till 2007 to under 10 metric

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, we can

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observe that CO2

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rose to their peak point in Sweden in 1977 to almost 11

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pollution

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was reduced dramatically until 2007 by approximately 6 metric

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. Moving on to the CO2 emission results of Italy, we can witness that they went up slowly from 4 to 7 metric

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between 1967 and 2007.

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, when it comes to Portugal, it is

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worth noting that CO2

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grew rapidly by 4 metric

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from 1987 to 2007. In comparison with the UK and Sweden where the trend was downward, Italy and Portugal had an upward stream in CO2

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discharge.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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