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Wealth and material belongings often measure the success that a person has. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What make a successful person?

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In today’s
world
, achievement of people is judged by the amount of money and things they possess.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss having
lot
Suggestion
a lot
lots
 of fortune is parallel to being successful and
secondly
, how hard
work
 can lead to more accomplishment
person
. On the one hand, amassing too much of the property, fancy cars and lavish life would be considered an accomplishment. More and more people today are running behind gathering personal fortunes. Most of the
person
Suggestion
people
 would like to show to the
world
, how much wealth they can display in terms of glittering
world
.
For example
, Bill gates is considered one of the richest persons in the
world
. Where his main business was into computers. He purchased an entire Island for millions of dollars. In
such
 cases for businessman an amount of wealth they have can be gauged with the lifestyle the lead.
On the other hand
, not all successful people consider wealth being the critical aspects. There are well accomplished personality among us, who showed hard
work
 is more critical to become successful.
For example
, people who entered into the scientific research field, put lots of hard
work
 and effort to become successful. They strive and overcome the risk they face to contribute something which in turn benefit the entire human race. In
such
 cases, they considered themselves much accomplished
person
Suggestion
people
 and earn name and fame. In conclusion, having huge bank balance can be considered a
person
 being successful,
however
, there are
lot
Suggestion
a lot
lots
 of people who consider success in term of hard
work
, risk taking nature and accomplishing something greater than money.
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