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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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With the current economic situation,
although
 many countries have achieved agricultural achievements, their lives are still difficult. Even suffering from hunger. Research shows that one of the causes is population growth and unemployment.
To begin
, population growth takes place in many countries and is gradually out of control. Many households still work hard to earn money.
However they
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However, they
 are helpless, the house is too crowded. They are exhausted and depressed. So
that is
 the reason that at every meal everyone has to yield for children and older people. Of course, they only eat moderately. From there their health will
also
 be affected. In the other hand, unemployment takes place in young people who are not willing to study and lazy. Life 4.0. Companies need talented people to contribute and help the company go up. And clearly
,
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,
the people who do not meet recruitment requirements will be disqualified. The consequence is that they have no job, no money to live and no need to go hungry. Not only do companies need young people to devote long-term dedication because they don't want to spend too much company budget for older people. To Sum up, Eager is extremely scary. Of course the only way to improve is to invest in education itself. Communicate for everyone to know the appropriate reproductive program. Hope everyone in the world will have a happy life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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