Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Despite
,
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,
the gradual increased of
fuel
price over the
last
ten years. Most of the people still debate that rising up the
cost
of
fuel
will reduce the use of
fuel
in the world. I strongly disagree with
this
statement.
However
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,
in
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
'll put up my points.
Firstly
,
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,
in
this
globalisation
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globalised
world the need of
fuel
is very essential. Most of the industries, Hospitals and transportations
are majorly depended
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majorly depend
on
fuel
. By increasing the
cost
of
fuel
will not affect them because they are already running their huge business
on
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with
that firm.It will not impact them as some people think.
In addition
,
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,
they will buy extra
fuel
if they got it
bychance
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by chance
.
secondly
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Secondly
, increasing of prices of
fuel
will lead to break the bond between the
countires
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
as per economy concerned.
For instance
,
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,
Industries have machines which is only run by
fuel
and government transports like buses
,
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,
trains
,
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,
metro are
also
depend
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depending
on
fuel
.
On the other hand
, Some people might think that
fuel
is only used by local people for transport which is not true.They assume that if
cost
Suggestion
the cost
will increase
then
people reduce the uses of transport and choose other modes like bicycle and walking which is good for them,
Moreover
, Less use of
fuel
also
helps us to reduce pollution in the environment. All in all, I believe that increasing the
cost
of
fuel
is not a solution to reduce its consumption rather than government should impose some laws.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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