Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While most employees spent their entire

life

working for the same company, many argue that it is better to

change

their

job

whenever they get a greater chance in other organizations. I personally believe that there will be a controversial effect if we will

work

for different companies in our whole working

life

. On the one hand, some workers want to

change

their

job

whenever they get a better opportunity in other organizations. They want to take a risk to get better salary and working experience. Most employees always seek to get a satisfied

job

by working in different companies. They can meet numerous people and have different working conditions if they will

work

for various organizations.

For example

, I want to

work

in a local company and

then

I will

change

to a foreign company to get a better salary and

life

experience.

On the other hand

, it is quite reasonable why people never leave from their initial companies. They can get a promotion if they will

work

longer in the same organization.

Besides

, people don’t want to quit from a place where they get used to the working conditions. They don’t want to start from the beginning again and I think it is the main reason why most employees always hesitate to

change

their jobs.

For instance

, my parents never think to resign from their present companies because they don’t want to deal with different situations in other companies.

Moreover

, some believe that they should have loyalty to their companies if they want to establish more successful

life

. To sum up, it is too risky to

change

our

job

frequently because there is no guarantee that we will have a better and successful

life

in other companies.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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