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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While most employees spent their entire
life
 working for the same company, many argue that it is better to
change
 their
job
 whenever they get a greater chance in other organizations. I personally believe that there will be a controversial effect if we will
work
 for different companies in our whole working
life
. On the one hand, some workers want to
change
 their
job
 whenever they get a better opportunity in other organizations. They want to take a risk to get better salary and working experience. Most employees always seek to get a satisfied
job
 by working in different companies. They can meet numerous people and have different working conditions if they will
work
 for various organizations.
For example
, I want to
work
 in a local company and
then
 I will
change
 to a foreign company to get a better salary and
life
 experience.
On the other hand
, it is quite reasonable why people never leave from their initial companies. They can get a promotion if they will
work
 longer in the same organization.
Besides
, people don’t want to quit from a place where they get used to the working conditions. They don’t want to start from the beginning again and I think it is the main reason why most employees always hesitate to
change
 their jobs.
For instance
, my parents never think to resign from their present companies because they don’t want to deal with different situations in other companies.
Moreover
, some believe that they should have loyalty to their companies if they want to establish more successful
life
. To sum up, it is too risky to
change
 our
job
 frequently because there is no guarantee that we will have a better and successful
life
 in other companies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
  • network
  • diversity of experience
  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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