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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development

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There is an increasing tendency of
marrige
the state of being a married couple voluntarily joined for life (or until divorce)
marriage
marriages
 that couples decide to marry and to have a child at 30s. While
som
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
 people think that
marrige
the state of being a married couple voluntarily joined for life (or until divorce)
marriage
 should be early, I believe that the age of thirties is adequate to get married.
To begin
 with, the foremost advantage of marriage at 30s is that partners have
successful career
Suggestion
successful careers
a successful career
. They have enough time to focus on their profession
untill
up to, before the time
until
 they marry.
As a result
, they achieve financial stability and rate of divorce may reduce.
Hence
, most of couples dissolve their marriage due to lack of money.
On the other hand
, people who get married early and have babies under 30 may come across difficulties. Commonly, they are not able to bring up children because they have not
learnt how take
Suggestion
learnt how to take
 care of babies.
In addition
, they do not get emotional maturity to live with a partner and to become parents. In conclusion, the decision to marry and become parents is the vital event in a personʼs life. It is advisable for
couple
Suggestion
the couple
a couple
couples
 to decide when they are
comletely
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
 prepared.
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