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Many students take part-time jobs whilst studying in university. Is this good or bad idea?

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In the recent times, the culture of higher
education
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 has changed dramatically. There is an exorbitant rise of the undergraduate students in the part-time employments along with their academic activities at the university. I believe that,
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 is the beneficial initiative
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 the scholars.
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 with, the major benefit of the above notion, it will inculcate the interpersonal and practical skills in the students, which is not possible to introduce in their curricula.
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 skills are very useful
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 the pupils in their professional life, when they enter in the competitive
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 environment.
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, many companies are looking for the potential candidates pursuing various practical skills
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 as the effective communication skill and time management.
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, the skills of time and money management will
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 helpful to the undergraduate in their academic activities and day to day life.
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, the student consists of practical skills will never miss the deadlines of his academic
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 as well as utilize his money wisely.
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, the temporary job along with the
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 makes the youngsters monetarily strong. Momentarily, the soaring cost of the
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 restricts the lower middle class youth for their higher
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.
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, the pupils have to
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 hard to balance their
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 and study, their economic conditions will become stable and their
education
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 will not interrupt.
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, the students can earn sufficient money to curb their living cost.
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, the financial burden would not distract them from their academic goals.
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, the practice
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on
 the job along with the study brings innumerable advantages to the pupils. To conclude, the all-round development of
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the younger
 generation is possible with the exploration of their experience of
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the workplace
 during their graduation.
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, I strongly opine that the part-time job with higher
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 is a lucrative idea.
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, the government should motivate the youth for
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 practice.

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