Many governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Governments, all around the world, have visions to fulfil and responsibilities to carry on, and they seek to achieve the overall developments of their countries for a prosperous future.

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Thus many

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Thus, many

governments think that economic

progress

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is the key to

success

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while others disagree with

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notion and opine that many other aspects

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as green environment, security, social values, traditions and peace among nations are more important. I personally believe that the economic

success

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of a

nation

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is an important goal for a

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government but

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government, but

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is not the most important one.

To begin

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with, many developed countries have already gained economic

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and yet they are suffering from growing crime rates, hostile relationship with other nations, corruptions and outbreak of epidemic diseases.

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Thus economic

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Thus, economic

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has failed to ensure a better life standard of citizens and

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is a proof that only economic

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should not be the vision of a

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.

On the contrary

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, without economic stability, a

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cannot ensure advancement in education, defence, healthcare, international trade and social safety. Again, industrialisation and

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in trades have ensured economic stability to many western and Asian countries and yet the environmental damage that has caused is overwhelming. What good money would bring to a

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if they cannot build a safe and green environment for the

next

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generation?

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, many people would

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argue that it is better to bestow a prosperous country to the new generation rather than leaving them a broken economy.

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, economic

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requires industrialisations, dominance in international trade and the use of cheap labours from other countries. History tells us that wars are imminent due to irrational competition among nations.

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, without economic

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, a country cannot defend itself from external threats, fight with epidemic diseases and cannot ensure proper health care facilities to its citizens.

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, some would say, with the economic

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the country will lose its old way of living, traditional values and uniqueness as a

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. But it should

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be considered that change is the fundamental basis of development and if a

nation

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worries too much about the old ways of living, it would fail to ensure

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at a steady pace. In conclusion, there is no doubt that economic

progress

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should be an important goal for a

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government but

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government, but

there are still many aspects which are equally important.