Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The world, we live in today is more competitive than ever before. The society we live in throws a challenge at every step of our lives. People believe that education is the best tool to overcome these challenges. In that bid, some parents believe that putting early
children
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early
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age
will get them ahead with rest, Use synonyms
while
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balance between sport and Use synonyms
study
is required to emerge a champion. Use synonyms
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how it is very important for Change preposition
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children
to have some free time to play. We all know that physical and mental growth takes place at Use synonyms
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children
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participation in creative activities prepares them mentally. Studies have shown that Remove the comma
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children
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balance of Add an article
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play time
and Correct your spelling
playtime
study
are more competitive than others. From my perspective, I believe that getting Use synonyms
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school
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an early
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on
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home work
brings Correct your spelling
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the
negative effect on their health. Correct article usage
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For example
, there is a Bollywood movie called Tare Zameen Par. Linking Words
This
movie is about a kid who does not like to Linking Words
study
but to play and paint. Use synonyms
Parents
were putting pressure on him and that was deteriorating his health. He started crying alone, Correct pronoun usage
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doing
unusual things at Correct word choice
and doing
school
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Then
a teacher noticed it and talked to him. After talking to that child, it came to light that he likes to paint and Linking Words
to
go to play. It was brought to his Fix the infinitive
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parents
notice and the teacher took him under his guidance. The child was allowed to paint, to play and Change noun form
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and finally
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To conclude
my point, I would only like to say that, please let the Linking Words
children
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an
age
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite