Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The world, we live in today is more competitive than ever before. The society we live in throws a challenge at every step of our lives. People believe that education is the best tool to overcome these challenges. In that bid, some parents believe that putting

children

in

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will get them ahead with rest,

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others think that

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balance between sport and

study

is required to emerge a champion.

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how it is very important for

children

to have some free time to play. We all know that physical and mental growth takes place at

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. When

children

play which requires strength and stamina, it helps them grow physically stronger.

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participation in creative activities prepares them mentally. Studies have shown that

children

with

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balance of

play time

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and

study

are more competitive than others. From my perspective, I believe that getting

children

to

school

at

early

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and putting pressure

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school

home work

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brings

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negative effect on their health.

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, there is a Bollywood movie called Tare Zameen Par.

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movie is about a kid who does not like to

study

but to play and paint.

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were putting pressure on him and that was deteriorating his health. He started crying alone,

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unusual things at

school

.

Then

a teacher noticed it and talked to him. After talking to that child, it came to light that he likes to paint and

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go to play. It was brought to his

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notice and the teacher took him under his guidance. The child was allowed to paint, to play and

study

as he

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brought

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positive changes in him,

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finally

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he became a famous artist. My point here, with

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is to highlight the importance of

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mix of sports and studies.

To conclude

my point, I would only like to say that, please let the

children

decide if they want to

study

or go out and play with friends. Of, course parental guidance is necessary to make them aware of

right

and wrong but putting them under pressure of studies at

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is not going to help our cause.