The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map shows how a
village
called Ryemouth has developed over the last
twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities.
In 1995, to the south of the village
where the sea is there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next
to this
was a small cafe. On the other side of the road
running by the sea, stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while
situated in the north east
part of the Correct your spelling
northeast
village
was
farmland and a park with trees. The main house of the Change the verb form
were
village
was located in the northwest around a main road
that runs from the coastal road
, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a small side-street
.
Turning to the Correct your spelling
side street
present day
map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, as does the hotel, albeit with parking facilities which it did not have before. Having been converted into a golf course, the farmland has now gone, Add a hyphen
present-day
while
the forest park has been removed to make way for tennis courts. Although
the old houses remain, new ones have been built, along with
a new road
with two new houses beside it.Submitted by geetfaux on
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