The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph represents the different
amount
of money (in $ Us Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
dollar
) that the people of Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
Germany
, France
, Italy and Austria
spent on buying books
over a period of 10 years from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, the amount spent on books
over the 10
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10-year
year
period increased in all four countries.
Germany
and France
were the first and second
highest spender
on Fix the agreement mistake
spenders
books
respectively in 1995. Up until the year
1999, both countries saw and
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an
million
dollar
in Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
Germany
and $5 million
dollars in France
. Between 1999 and 2001, France
increase their overall
outlay on book purchases, whereas
Germany
’s total expenditure dropped slightly. By 2005, Germany
and France
saw their highest total spent on book purchases and remained the first and second
high spenders.
In 1995, Italy was the third
highest spender whereas
Austria
was the fourth highest spender at 30 million
dollars, 20 million
dollars behind Italy. By the year
2003, both Italy and Austria
saw increases in the total amount of money spent on books
. By the year
2005, Austria
had overtaken Italy to become the third highest
book purchaser across the four countries.Add a hyphen
third-highest
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