The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph represents the different
amount
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amounts
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of money (in $ Us
dollar
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dollars
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) that the people of
Germany
,
France
, Italy and
Austria
spent on buying
books
over a period of 10 years from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, the amount spent on
books
over the
10
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year
period increased in all four countries.
Germany
and
France
were the first and
second
highest
spender
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on
books
respectively in 1995. Up until the
year
1999, both countries saw
and
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an
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increase in spending -$10
million
dollar
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dollars
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in
Germany
and $5
million
dollars in
France
. Between 1999 and 2001,
France
increase their
overall
outlay on book purchases,
whereas
Germany
’s total expenditure dropped slightly. By 2005,
Germany
and
France
saw their highest total spent on book purchases and remained the first and
second
high spenders. In 1995, Italy was the
third
highest spender
whereas
Austria
was the fourth highest spender at 30
million
dollars, 20
million
dollars behind Italy. By the
year
2003, both Italy and
Austria
saw increases in the total amount of money spent on
books
. By the
year
2005,
Austria
had overtaken Italy to become the
third highest
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book purchaser across the four countries.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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