Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this? Would you consider doing this yourself and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Recently, overseas university admissions have significantly increased throughout the globe. Many students prefer to go to foreign country for their tertiary education because of multicultural exposure for better job opportunities later. I strongly advocate

this

vogue with my personal experience.

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this

essay, we will contend for overseas higher education and will draw an inference. Why

this

trend has picked a pace lately?

Although

this

is a contentious issue, still I feel it as propitious for the career of an individual

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Students who travel abroad for their higher studies, get exposed to

multicultural environment

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the multicultural environment

as they get

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

to study with other students of different nationals, resulting in better interpersonal skills. My brother did his MBA from

oxford

a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner

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university and I can see the drastic change in personality and the way he articulates things as compared to others.

This

trend inevitable

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has been

propitious for their career lately. These students get priority over others, while getting recruited for various organizations. A study by Mckinsey states that these days organizations prefer employees with exposure to foreign educational institutes over those who do not get

this

opportunity. Higher education from overseas has definite benefits of better job opportunities. To recapitulate, having mulled over above stated information, and deliberating all the facts, it can be deducted that, foreign university graduates have

multiculture

of or relating to or including several cultures

multicultural

exposure and are better prospects for jobs. I will surely like to study in

such

institute given an opportunity.

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Fully explain your ideas

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