Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility, while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion?

In today’s globalized world, there are issues related to the environment and cleanliness is one of them. Some people suggest that
inhabitants
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the inhabitants
should take
responsibility
to clean their nearby places, while others think that it is
obligation
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an obligation
the obligation
of
government
. To commence with, cleanliness is a matter of hygiene and health of people. Areas which are dirty or unclean has more cases related to the health of people who live there. So, it is concern of society that people clean their locality. Because it is
responsibility
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the responsibility
of people to clean dirt spread by them and not by
sweeper
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the sweeper
a sweeper
. If people are
irresponsible
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irresponsible, then
then
sweeper
also
think to not clean area. At the end of the day it is a loss of society only.
For instance
,
government
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the government
of India launched clean India moment to spread awareness about
cleanliness
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the cleanliness
of nearby places and
government
also
provide prizes and awards for best clean cities of India. So, it spreads awareness as well as people will concern to get
award
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an award
the award
awards
and clean their places.
On the other hand
, some people believe that it is
duty
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the duty
a duty
of
government
to clean the society, while I think that it is
mutual
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the mutual responsibility
a mutual responsibility
responsibility
because dirt or waste created by people needs to be in
dustbin
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the dustbin
a dustbin
dustbins
or appropriate place not on the streets. If people rely upon just
government
bodies to
clean
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clean, then
then
it needs more manpower as well as money to control it. But it can be easy if people adopt to put their garbage in
dustbin
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the dustbin
a dustbin
and not to spread dirt on the road,
government
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the government
also
request people to do
this
.
For example
, people can separate garbage and daily dust by putting in two different dustbins, so it may easy for
government
to collect it from people and recycle procedure for
this
become easier by separating garbage. To recapitulate, I believe that it is
responsibility
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the responsibility
of the people to clean their nearby places because why would other concern while people are not aware to clean their places. So, it is
social
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a social responsibility
the social responsibility
responsibility
to clean area.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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