In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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fast pace electric

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train

train's

journey can be done in

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hours, which

takes days in normal trains or by buses or cars. With these fast trains executives can go to other cities attend

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of them or themselves

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business meetings and can come back even in a single day

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on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

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of them or themselves

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families. Area Project manager, Area Construction manager in Multinational companies can visit

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these big

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executives'

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time is money. On other hand Countries which are under development cannot spend much money for these fast track electric speed trains. As

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those countries can divert

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money on improving the existing public transport.

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they can help

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people and can support. To conclude

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the Country how developed it is and on

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revenue generation.