In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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men
, some executives and for some
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transfer power to someone
delegates
.
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Firstly, with
fast pace electric
trains
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train
train's
journey can be done in
hours which
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hours, which
takes days in normal trains or by buses or cars. With these fast trains executives can go to other cities attend
thier
of them or themselves
their
business meetings and can come back even in a single day
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
and can be with
thier
of them or themselves
their
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lots
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of them or themselves
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For
these big
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executives'
executive's
time is money. On other hand Countries which are under development cannot spend much money for these fast track electric speed trains. As
such
those countries can divert
this
money on improving the existing public transport.
with
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With
this
they can help
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of them or themselves
their
people and can support. To conclude
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  • efficient
  • congestion
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  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
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