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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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Decline of students enrolling in
Science
subject
 is increasingly controversial. Not many students give priority to these subjects anymore.
This
 essay will talk about various reasons for
this
 problem and different impacts it has on our
society
. In the past, a
lot
 of students started choosing
Science
 as a core
subject
 in their curriculum. But
Science
 is a very demanding
subject
, a
lot
 of time and hard work is required to understand some essential concepts, and a
lot
 of practice to master them. In recent times, due to lack of jobs in
Science
field
 people were facing unemployment, which
demotivated
 children from choosing that
subject
. But a
lot
 of other fields
such
 as IT and marketing developed very fast and children started prioritising subjects required in these fields, which is not
science
. A recent study shows that due to these reasons numbers of
science
 students decreased by 68% since 2010. There are some major adverse effects on
society
such
 as decrease in specialised work force in a particular
field
 and less development in that area which causes instability in
society
.
Firstly
,
science
 is a practical
subject
 it requires experience and book knowledge and since there will be less professionals in
science
 sector new generation will suffer some problems in acquiring a proper understanding of these practices.
For instance
, most of the junior Doctors study under an expert to gain enough experience to work alone.
Secondly
,
science
field
 will suffer less development due to lack of workforce.
For instance
, if there is a new pandemic in the future which does not have a proper cure, due to lack of Doctors, that can delay in preparation for the medicine required at that time. In conclusion, there must be a balance between every
field
 in our
society
.
This
 essay discussed about both problems and provided some effects it have on our
society
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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