Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In Britain, when someone
gets old they
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gets old, they
often go to old
age
home
.
This
is
also
called as
old people's
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an old people's home
old people's homes
home
or a retirement people's
home
.
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.
There they live in a
home
with
other
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Other
old
age
people where there are nurses to look after them.
Firstly
, there can be a
case
where old
age
people they
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people, they
don't have children.
Secondly
, there can be a
case
they have
children but
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children, but
travelled abroad for their bread and butter and for
thier
of them or themselves
their
lively hood.
Thirdly
, there can be a
case
they will have
children but
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children, but
after their children's marriage
thier
of them or themselves
their
son-in-law or daughter-in-law are not compatible with them or
vise
a holding device attached to a workbench; has two jaws to hold workpiece firmly in place
vice
versa. Obviously, in
case
of no
adjust ment
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
adjustment
with other parties old
age
people prefer to go and live in
old
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an old age home
age
home
where they will find
lot
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lots
of companions of their
age
and with same like
mentaly
involving the mind or an intellectual process
mental
people. Now coming to the discussion of who should take
care
of their expenses. In
case
, if they have children and they are sound enough in wealth, Obviously they have to take
care
of their expenses. Old
age
parents will have some expenses,
in addition
to that, at that
age
they need some assistant for that nurses are hired. So, these expenses ought to be
bored
have
borne
by children. When children are not
supporting
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supported
either they themselves are financially weak to take
care
of
parents
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parents'
parent's
expenses or they are neglecting parents in either
case
government should take
care
of the old
age
people. Since
Britan
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
, collects
good amount
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the good amount
a good amount
of taxes, Government
also
should not have a problem in supporting.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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