The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Column chart depicts the
number
of men and women
education
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educated
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in Britain in
division
Add an article
the division
a division
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of three phrases classified into full-time and part-time from the
year
1970 to 1990.
Firstly
, Male pursues both Full-time
education
and Part-time
education
.
Number
Correct article usage
The number
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of males for Full-time
education
in the
year
1970
were
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was
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marked 100 and
has
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apply
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increased gradually to 250 in the
year
1991 respectively.
However
Part-time
education
is 1000 in the
year
1970 and experienced a dip in the
year
1980 to 850.
Although
has increased in the
year
1991
at
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to
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900.
Secondly
,
Female
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Females
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with Full-time
education
are
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is
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50 in
number
during 1970 and 200 in the
year
1980 rising to 250 in the
year
1991. The
number
of
Part-time
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part-time
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education
in the
year
1970 is nearly 700 increasing to 800 in the
year
1980 and
rose
Wrong verb form
rising
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to 1100 in the
year
1991. In conclusion, Full-time
education
is studied less compared to Part-time
education
as they get time to work and earn simultaneously.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, education, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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