The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Column chart depicts the
number
of men and women education
in Britain in Replace the word
educated
division
of three phrases classified into full-time and part-time from the Add an article
the division
a division
year
1970 to 1990.
Firstly
, Male pursues both Full-time education
and Part-time education
.Number
of males for Full-time Correct article usage
The number
education
in the year
1970 were
marked 100 and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
has
increased gradually to 250 in the Unnecessary verb
apply
year
1991 respectively. However
Part-time education
is 1000 in the year
1970 and experienced a dip in the year
1980 to 850. Although
has increased in the year
1991 at
900.
Change preposition
to
Secondly
, Female
with Full-time Fix the agreement mistake
Females
education
are
50 in Change the verb form
is
number
during 1970 and 200 in the year
1980 rising to 250 in the year
1991. The number
of Part-time
Fix capitalization
part-time
education
in the year
1970 is nearly 700 increasing to 800 in the year
1980 and rose
to 1100 in the Wrong verb form
rising
year
1991.
In conclusion, Full-time education
is studied less compared to Part-time education
as they get time to work and earn simultaneously.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, education, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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