Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people can not always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinon.
Having a satisfied
job
is considered more significant than its security. While some claim that securing a permanent profession and life long
financial status is of utmost importance. In my opinion, I think that continuing through life
lifelong
job
contentment and sense of satisfaction play a key role in healthy and productive life
.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that having a job
which assures lifetime flow of money
and sense of security offers a peaceful and stress free life
. People with permanent jobs do not have to worry about financial issues as they can secure their present and future. For example
, permanent employees can recieve
bank loans for get something; come into possession of
receive
doing
huge investments and the act that results in something coming to be
making
able
to invest Suggestion
ability
abilities
money
to earn more. In addition
, people who are away from the tension of searching fixed job
and saving money
, can easily concentrate on other aspects of life
such
as they can follow their passion. Some people love to enjoy their hobbies of music, sports or travel around the world. Therefore
, while doing permanent job
, people can enjoy their life
and remain financially secured
and satisfied.
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secure
On the other hand
, in each profession, job
satisfaction and fulfillment
is more crucial than just earning a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
money
and I agree. Firstly
, satisfied job
may often result a healthy
mind in a healthy body. Suggestion
result in a healthy
In other words
, having pleasurable
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a pleasurable job
job
may definitely leads
to health benefits. As employees are happily doing their jobs with full commitment and enjoyment, may have less health problems Suggestion
lead
such
as heart diseases. As a result
, they certainly have sound health and healthy life
. Secondly
, happy and content people may be more creative and innovative in ideas that really add in organization’sgrowth
and productivity. Suggestion
the organization’s growth
organization’s growth
Moreover
, satisfied employees may also
concentrate on their personal commitments and maintain better work life
balance.
To conclude, people may have varying opinions regarding importance
of Suggestion
the importance
job
security and permanent job
. I believe that professional satisfaction is more important to lead a content life
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