Despite clear warnings from climate scientists, few people are changing their habits. Why is this the case? What can be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

Living in the modern age, the subject of climate change has emerged as one of the devastating environmental threats;
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very few individuals take definite measures to mitigate accumulative effects of
this
issue
on the local surroundings.As the deviation from responsibility
as well as
lack of conscious awareness can be attributed to the main inducements of
this
problem,so would educate
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and forcing a complex of charges would be
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optimal solutions. The first reason why
people
are apathetic towards taking radical actions to preserve the environment is that they opine that it is the duty of organizations to clean and dispose of waste and
people
can hardly understand the irreparable damage to the planet they are doing by being environmentally unfriendly.Another major contributing factor that gives rise to the
issue
is the lack of
people
's awareness towards
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consequences of polluting local nature.In its broadest
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individuals continue to poison rivers
as well as
animals which in turn results in the shortage of resources and extinction of species of animals.
Thus
, providing that the problems outlined above occur, the world may undergo
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rapid dehydration. In stark contrast,
however
, there are
also
a range of strong options to re-nurture the perception of many minds and raise public consciousness.Perhaps the most effective facilitator to resolve
this
issue
would be the government's intervention.In
this
sense, local authorities ought to school and foster the habit of recycling products among the
people
.
As a result
, the pollution rates can be diminished unless
people
are informed about the harmful effects of climate change.The second remedy to
this
problem is to levy a high charge for polluting.
For instance
, in some Western countries the usage of fuel-powered cars
prohibited
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and
people
using
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are forced to pay a complex fine and new electronic vehicles are practiced.In
this
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people
can find a way to the salvation of a planet. In conclusion, the topic of environmental destruction
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of awareness of individuals has become
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of broad interest and
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ought to take framing habit of recycling under
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strict control to mitigate
further
threats of climate change.
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