Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

I do enjoy dancing, but only when I don'
t
feel any pressure because I am
kind
of (a) shy
person
. No one ever taught me how to dance. I am not very good at dancing. I learned what I know about dancing by watching other people dancing. I can talk about the Halay. It is one of the essential Turkish folk dances. It is being practised generally in the eastern part of Turkey. People do
Halay
United States rock singer who was one of the first to popularize rock'n'roll music (1925-1981)
Haley
with a Turkish type of drum and pipe. They hold each other's
hands
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hand
and move forward and back with the rhythm of the music. I don'
t
think traditional dances will be popular in the future because many in younger generations consider traditional dances "uncool". They don'
t
want to engage with these types of dances. They are just interested with dances that are popular all over the world. I want to talk about my father. He is tall male. He has black eyes and (a)
gray
of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
hair. He sometimes wears glasses because he is short sighted. He is
kind
of thin
person
when compared with those who are at the same age with him. He is generally reasonable
person
compared to my
mother
. I rarely have a discussion with him. He tends to solve problems by talking and reaching a solution. He is
also
kind
of generous
person
compared to my
mother
. When I demand something from him and tell him why I need that, he can buy that if he finds my request reasonable. They can look similar in ways of either physical appearance or psychological features. They can look identical in both ways too.
For
example
, their hairs or
/
and eyes can be (the) same colour. They both can be easily-angered
person
when facing with a problem. I think it is a prejudice. The opposite can be true.
For
example
, I have a girlfriend whom traits are more similar to those of her father than those of her
mother
. (The) same is true for fathers and son. It could be wrong to assume that all sons look like their fathers more.
For
example
, my eyes, hair and even (the) shape of my head looks similar (to) my
mother
's. I depends on how much time
this
person
spends with his
/
her family and friends. If
this
person
didn'
t
spend much time with the parents in his
/
her early ages, and
this
person
likes more to hang out with his
/
her friends, he is more likely to be influenced more by his
/
her friends. In
this
kind
of situation,
for
example
, psychological features of
this
person
can get more similar (
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
) those of
this
person
's close friends

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