In the past,most people used to travel to their place of work.With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones,more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Many years ago
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most people used to travel to their place of work.But, these days there are a lot of new technologies.Especially
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computers, smartphones and etc.Many people are starting to work from home.
Firstly
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, staying in a house is better than give abroad.
However
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some people prefer
go
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to go
out.Because If they
travel another country,
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travel to another country,
travel to another country,
they can learn
language
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the language
and more experience.But, If they stay in a house
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they can save their money and time too.
In addition
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they have got much time for their children and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reliteves
estimated by comparison; not absolute or complete
relatives
relieves
relative's
.But staying in a house seems tedious.Remember, travel to another country is not easy.
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, there are a lot of strange people and places. In conclusion, both of them has any advantages and disadvantages.So, everybody
choose
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chooses
suitable option for themselves.

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