Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others thinks this is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years the field of
sport
is increasing in every part of the globe. Most well-known athletes are provided with hug
e amount of
Suggestion
a huge amount
money
compared with other occupations' workers. Certain individuals insist that it can be unjust because they dismiss that all professionals should be equal.
However
, oth
er gr
any of various alternatives; some other
another
oup acc
ept th
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accepts
e concept that renowned
sport
professionals should be honoured and can rec
ieve mo
get something; come into possession of
receive
re
money
and I agree with them. The following paragraphs take a look both views.
First
and foremost, it is often maintained that
sport
pla
y a
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plays
chief role in most nations.
That is
because it can represent the power of the country.
In addition
, the athlete professionals is pri
de of
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the pride
a pride
the public due to their best devotion to their job. As far as i a
m
refers to the speaker or writer
I
concerned wol
d-re
everything that exists anywhere
world
would
nowned
sport
professionals can earn more
money
than other group of workers. Most believe that they sho
ul be
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
shall
equal in every job whe
res ot
In or at or to what place
where
where's
whereas
her people of the opinion that
sport
professionals sho
ul be
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
shall
resected and given more salary by the governments. In my opinion, the majority of sportsmen are tru
ely wo
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
t
h it
worthy of being treated in a particular way
worth
.
For exa
mple when th
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example, when
e country's national anthem is played in int
ernational stadium al
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an international stadium
the international stadium
l people feel very proud of that nation's strength.
Furthermore
, bea
cause of
for the reason that; on account of
because
their hard work they try to get a great deal of salary and certain
sport
supporters argue that ath
etes especially su
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athletes, especially
athletes especially
atheists especially
ccessful and famous ones always devote themselves to training and practice. Indeed, after that those can face fatigue and may lea
ds to
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lead
stressful living.
Also
, these require uch
(quantifier used with mass nouns) great in quantity or degree or extent
much
money
to medical care. For those reasons professional ath
etes ca
a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
n earn much more
money
than other necessary jobs.
However
, some people refute the idea that not all professional are loyal to their work and certain ones even cheat the referees in order to get
money
. They
also
noticed that some spo
rtmen br
someone who engages in sports
sportsmen
sportsman
ibe the judges. So, for them the government should impose strict measure to make them be honourable and to restrict
this
kind of corruption. In conclusion, for certain people
this
is not a just statement while others of the opinion that successful athlete professionals can earn
such
a good salary for their work and personally i a
c
refers to the speaker or writer
I
knowledge
this
view.

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