Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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In many parts of the world, motorways provide
population
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the population
with technical assistance in order to travel
fast
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faster
as well as they make long distances short.
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, they breed some problematic situations in general. And
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essay will submit that
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problem
and their solutions. Nowadays, a considerable number of people prefer a
motorway
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service area, since it creates the opportunity for the drivers to run their cars as quickly as possible, but on the minus side, it generates perilous actions
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as accidents, race, increasing the speed limit and pollution. It might be argued that, the speed plays a pivotal role in the
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and in
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case the driver should pay a particular attention to his/her level of speed, due to the fact that he/she has to assume responsibility for others' life.
For instance
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: One year ago, I with my classmates decided to visit a valley, so called Fergana and it was the
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travel for all of us. While we were going there, the driver attempted to raise the speed of the vehicle so as to reach our destination
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faster
, but
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he bumped into a stone due to his inexperience. After that, a friend of mine was hospitalised immediately. It is commonly contemplated that, the traffic
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on
the
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disturbs the delicate balance of atmosphere, generating poisonous fumes negatively on
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the human organism
human organism
and environment.
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, an appropriate solution to
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problem would be to produce electronic cars that can be charged through electricity. It is observed that, these days, an excessive number of humans are inclined to organise the race and it can result from allowing them to taste the death. I presume the basis of that dangerous action should be based on the fine or prison. To conclude, increasing the speed limit in the
motorway
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, will definitely bring us to the catastrophe and a perfect solution to
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is to stick to the principles of the road wherever we (they) are, but a possible solution so as to protect the ecology from petrol fumes could be the means of electronic transportation implementing them in our social life.
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