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buying and renting house in England and Wales from1918 to 2011

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The bar chart displays that buying and renting
house
Suggestion
houses
 in England and Wales from1918 to 2011. In general
,
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,
the proportion of households owning accommodation rose from1918 to 2011. 23% of the families lived in
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 bought
house
Suggestion
a house
the house
.The
number
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 of owning remained steady from1939 to1953.After1971
,
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,
owning outnumber renting.There was
rose
come into existence; take on form or shape
arisen
 by in the
number
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 of
owning
Suggestion
Owning
 between1953 to 2001
,
Accept space
,
while the percentage amounted to a high point at about 69% in 2001.But the
number
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 of dropped by 2001 to 2011
(
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(
about64%). The percentage of renting fall down considerably
,
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,
while households renting accommodation around77% in 1918.The
number
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 of
fall
Suggestion
falls
 down since1918.Renting to a very low
number
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 about 31%.But after 2001 to rose again that the renting percentage rose by 36
%
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in the end.

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