IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 2.5

What does it take to be a good parent? Discuses your opinion

#parent #discuses
Parenthood is not an easy task. It is a responsibility. A
parent
 must provide love, care safe home, health care, good education, and the well-being of his children. Nowadays the definition of being a good
parent
 has its challenges. There are many things to consider these days.
For example
, home safety is no longer about safety measurements indoors like kitchen cabinets, toilet seat lockers. Outdoors like safety kits for sports, and riding a bike it has extended beyond that a
parent
 must keep an open eye on T.V materials, Internet content, and sm
artphone A
a cellular phone that is able to perform many of the functions of a computer, typically having a relatively large screen and an operating system capable of running general-purpose applications
Smartphone
pps. To wake up in the middle of the night to rush your child to ER
d
Suggestion
the ER
ue to fever, or st
omach ache.
an ache localized in the stomach or abdominal region
stomachache
To help them with their school assignments an essay deadline with love and a big smile. To be supportive, helpful when needed. All that said being a lo
ving caring,
Accept comma addition
loving, caring
and there for your child is the most important thing to be a
considered good
Suggestion
considered a good
parent
.
Submitted by shamsoadam22 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • nurturing
  • role model
  • child-rearing
  • empathy
  • authoritative parenting
  • permissive parenting
  • child development
  • bonding
  • positive reinforcement
  • emotional intelligence
  • constructive criticism
  • parental involvement
  • behavioral guidelines
  • self-discipline
  • cognitive growth
  • adolescence
  • psychosocial
What to do next:
Look at other essays: