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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourage the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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It is thought by some that young people don’t practice
sport
 because of the huge amount of
sport
 channels on the
television
 in
lot
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a lot
 of countries. Even though I agree that
television
 makes people lazier, especially by watching professional athletes, there are other reasons why teenagers do not take part in
sport
 activities.
People waste lot
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People waste lots
 of
time
 on the sofa watching the
television
, preferring the
sport
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
spot
 on the screen than practice activities themselves.
This
 comes to be true
also
 for young
people which
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people, which
instead
 should be involved in physical activities both for health and socialisation issues.
For instance
, football matches are followed by most and represent one of the main topics of discussion in
classroom
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the classroom
 and outside. The
sport
 in the
television
 is always performed by high
levels
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level
 athletes and
this
 can cause a loss of self-esteem.
Moreover
, the
time
 resource is limited and if young people spend a lot of
time
 on
sport
 channels, they do not have
time
 to enjoying the outdoor activities.
On the other hand
, I believe that
also
 social networks and computer games contribute on the lost
time
. Nowadays, young people are fully surrounded by technology and they prefer to be home and be “connected” in some virtual world than live the real world.
As a result
, they lose the connection with their body and its possibilities. To conclude, sporty
television
 programmes have
huge impact
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a huge impact
 on discouraging young people to take part in
sport
 activities, but
also
 other technology innovations have a role in that. In my opinion parents should encourage their children in outdoor sports
such
 as hiking, climbing, kayaking to contribute
on
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to
 their
psychical
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psyche
psyches
 and physic health.

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