Evaluate the usefulness of Bigelow and La Gaipa’s (1975) work for understanding children’s friendship.

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Children’s friendships were not a focus of
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for psychologists prior to the work of Bigelow and La
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. Psychologist prioritised like Bowlby focused more upon the importance of primary attachment,
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however it
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however, it
is important to not the influence that friendships have on children.
Friendship
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in children can yield interesting results because it is a relationship among peers as opposed to the more common adult authority figure. Prior to Bigelow and La
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’s
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William Hartup reasoned that
friendship
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is far more abstract that the ‘friend or not friend’ definition previously put forward. Enter Bigelow and John La
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’s
study
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. The
study
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conducted was conducted
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was conducted
in the 1970s with a focus on how children understood and valued friendships. 480 children were drawn from 8 schools, 30 girls and 30 boys
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from, each
with an age range of 6-14. The subjects were asked to write an essay on their best (same sex) friend and what they expected from
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person. Beforehand Bigelow and La
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had written a list of 21 different categories of
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expectation, which were
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compared against the essays. The essays were originally a qualitative form of data, but Bigelow and La
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were using a large
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size (480) and were trying to ascertain a generalisation of
friendship
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. So, by using content analysis the broke the essays down into quantitative information.
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allowed for easy comparison of
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groups and genders. On inspection of their results they proposed a three-stage model of development of
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expectations, with the idea becoming more complex as the children matured. Moving from shared activities and geographical closeness, to a focus on trust and sharing and
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a similarity of attitudes and beliefs.
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study
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was valuable because it brought the subject of
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in childhood into the interests of psychology and it yielded an interesting hypothesis on how children understood
friendship
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. My chief argument against its usefulness is the way they changed qualitative data into quantitative. I understand that with the
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size being so large it would take a long time to evaluate each essay and by quantifying
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it, they
could use their list of 21 categories to make generalisations about
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.
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, they lose some of the individual characteristics in some children’s friendships, especially if these characteristics fall outside of their 21 categories.
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, in more qualitative focused
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studies, psychologists
were able to extract a more nuanced understanding of childhood
friendship
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. An example of one of these qualitative studies would be William Cosaro’s ethnographic
study
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. Ethnography has a unique advantage over experimental and observational studies by immersing the psychologist into the group under
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approach involved him spending time around the children carefully filming and observing their conversations with each other.
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differed from Bigelow and La
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’s
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because the children were formalising their answers for an adult researcher.
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,
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allowed the younger age groups to express their expectations in a clearer manner, because they were not hindered by their linguistic or written skills if they were conversing with someone of their own level.
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allowed Corsaro to show an example of younger children, aged 3, speaking about friendships in intricate and conceptual ways. Jenny and Betty are both within Bigelow and La
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’s
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stage of their three-stage model, but they show they are mindful of each other’s feelings “I do like you, Jenny… I do […] I know you wanted- all the time- you want to know because you’re my best friend.” (Corsaro, 19985, p.166) proving that the
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stage of Bigelow and La
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’s three stage model was too simplistic. Another important outcome of Bigelow and La
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’s
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would be the interest in cultural differences it raised. Starting
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to
González et al’s
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comparing the friendships of children in Canada and Cuba, highlighting how collectivist and individual cultures shaped the children’s expectations of
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. Collectivist cultures favouring mutual assistance and individualistic
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cultures, putting
more emphasis on common interests.
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study
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opened a new vein of though into the categorisation of cultures and whether they should be useful in the
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of children’s friendships, Doran French worked with a
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of students from the US, South Korea and Indonesia to compare their friendships. Her theory being that if collectivist and individualistic cultures affected friendships, the south Korean friendships and the Indonesian friendships would share similar expectations but differ from that of the US. French’s
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favoured the quantitative approach, like Bigelow and La
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, she asked the students to keep a record of two weeks of social interactions with their friends and rate the quality of their relationships. After finding that Indonesian and South Korean students differed on most French’s criteria, 7 out of 8, in
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fact, both
nations students shared more in common with that of the US students.
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suggesting
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that collectivist and individualist are perhaps too broad in their terminology to define how cultures shape
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. Whilst Bigelow and La
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’s
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has not procured
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have not procured
a definitive answer to the nature of
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, quantitative studies not being able to capture the nuance and qualitative studies not having a large enough
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size to procure generalisations, they did bring the
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of children’s friendships in the focus of psychology. Planting a seed that
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leads
to the observations of children across countries, studying how
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changed through age groups and was affected by culture. Even now in contemporary times psychologists are still studying it as technology changes the way we interact and how friendships adapt to that. Bigelow and La
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were integral to the field of
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, their work was the foundation to the understanding of children’s friendships.

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