You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
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statement and In Linking Words
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essay , I will explain how teamwork is good for a human being with some examples from the newspaper and personal experience.
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To begin
with , There is no doubt working in a Linking Words
team
always increases the productivity and efficiency of the work. Each Use synonyms
person
has their own qualities and traits so we should learn from them. Use synonyms
For Example
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cannot develop a software application alone and Use synonyms
this
is the reason I.T. companies hire many employees in one Linking Words
team
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others are in website development or testing. Linking Words
Group
activities are very important for balancing work and life.
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for instance
, In recent survey done by the Delhi Times revealed that 80% of Linking Words
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are extremely happy to be a part of any Use synonyms
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as a result
either they do not perform well or sometimes it leads to mental stress Linking Words
such
as anxiety , and depression .
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To conclude
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also
it is beneficial for improving other skills Linking Words
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as communication ,sharing, patience etc. I believe working in a Linking Words
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task achievement
Your introduction clearly states your viewpoint, but tightening the thesis statement to be more concise would enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs to help guide the reader. Connecting sentences at the end of one paragraph and the beginning of the next can improve flow.
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Expand on your examples to ensure they fully support your points. More specific details or personal anecdotes could strengthen your arguments.
coherence cohesion
Vary your sentence structure to avoid repetitiveness and enhance readability. More complex sentences can enhance the cohesiveness of your writing.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which nicely bookend your essay.
task achievement
You tackle the prompt directly and give relevant reasons and examples supporting your viewpoint.
task achievement
The discussion on the benefits of teamwork for productivity and mental health adds depth to your argument.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.