The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the Household

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of

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in an average Australian family and,

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of it, the

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emissions. There are six sectors of interest described by a

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: water heating, refrigeration, lighting, cooling, heating and other appliances. In short, there is almost the same

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of

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used (2%) and

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gas

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emanated (3%) for cooling.

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, the usage of

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for lighting is

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4%

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the

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of

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emission

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is twice as much. It's the same for refrigeration data, in fact

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there is a

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of 7% in

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consume

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,

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on

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the other

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a 14%

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gas

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emission

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.

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, there is

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usage of

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for heating of

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42%

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the

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of

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emissions is

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15%. It could be noticed that only in

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case the

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of

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is lower than

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consume

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.

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of water heating is more or less

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30% in both charts (exactly 32% in the

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one),

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for other appliances there is

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15% of

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energy

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used and

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28% of

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gas

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emanated.

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conclusion, we can outline that in most

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cases, the usage of

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is

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half compared to the

gas

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emission

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. The

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is used

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for heating,

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greenhouse

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gas

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emission

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is basically caused by water heating and various appliances.