The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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of three different food product groups in the USA from 1979 to2009 over a time span of 30 years.
Overall
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it is clear that
the prices increased for the three food product groups showed fluctuations.
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fresh fruits and vegetables marked with gradual upsurge compared to the remaining group with similar trends in the pay
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carbonated drinks
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the lowest among them. It is transparent that, in the initial year the cost of fresh fruit and vegetables was above 50 and reached 100 in 1984.
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experienced a sudden dip in the fare between 1983 to 1985and later it surpassed all other food prices.
Moreover
, it reached over 300 after random fluctuations and accelerated well above the consumer index expense.
Conversely
, the rate of sugar and sweet
as well as
carbonated drinks remained constant with that of fresh fruit and vegetables
till1985
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till 1985
.Surprisingly ,both of them decelerated under the consumer amount index
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but steadily topped
at the end
of the period.
However
,sugar and sweet and carbonated drinks finished with a cost of nearly 200 and above 50 respectively ;which was below the consumer price index.

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