The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided multiple line graph portrays the information regarding changes in
cost
of three different food product groups in the USA from 1979 to2009 over a time span of 30 years.
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the cost
Overall
,it is clear that
the prices increased for the three food product groups showed fluctuations. While
,
fresh fruits and vegetables marked with gradual upsurge compared to the remaining group with similar trends in the pay Remove the comma
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of
carbonated drinks Change preposition
for
was
the lowest among them.
It is transparent that, in the initial year the cost of fresh fruit and vegetables was above 50 and reached 100 in 1984.Change the verb form
were
While
,
experienced a sudden dip in the fare between 1983 to 1985and later it surpassed all other food prices. Remove the comma
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Moreover
, it reached over 300 after random fluctuations and accelerated well above the consumer index expense.
Conversely
, the rate of sugar and sweet as well as
carbonated drinks remained constant with that of fresh fruit and vegetables till1985
.Surprisingly ,both of them decelerated under the consumer amount indexCorrect your spelling
till 1985
,
but steadily topped Remove the comma
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at the end
of the period.However
,sugar and sweet and carbonated drinks finished with a cost of nearly 200 and above 50 respectively ;which was below the consumer price index.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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