In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Going to shopping used to be a chore for necessary goods, while recently it if though by many to be a leisure activity. In my

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trend has by far more negative impact on society than positive, due to its many drawbacks I will discuss about.

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, shopping is a

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and energy consuming hobby which can lead to addiction. Many people nowadays, try to release the stress and tension accumulated during the day or the week spending their revenues

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unnecessary goods.

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, shopping

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are always full of people trying to get over their thoughts and emotions with objects they accumulate in their houses.

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, women who have problems with their image or self-esteem spend a markable amount of

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in beauty shops buying make up or perfumes, as well as trying clothes which make them feel better.

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way of facing their troubles is not leading them to a

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solution, but

is a temporary happiness.

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,

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have become amusing places with cafes, plays and cinema, where you can lose your

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very easily. During the weekend many families, teenagers and couples spend their

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inside some building with artificial lights and lack of oxygen

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of practising sport or other outdoor activities.

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, because people have now more money and credit is available, it is very easy to lose the control

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the money spent.

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, young which

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the money, can enter a

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with the intent to buy few

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things, but

they can be confused by the many bargains and they came back home with full bags but empty card. In conclusion, I believe shopping regarded as

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hobby has many negative aspects which can lead people to be

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, unhealthy and full of debts.