Task 1: The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie
chart
illustrates productive farming Use synonyms
land
Use synonyms
in
around the world is reduced by the main Change preposition
apply
some
reasons, Correct quantifier usage
apply
while
the table Linking Words
present
information about the percentage of Replace the word
presents
land
degraded by several causes, namely deforestation, over-cultivation and over-grazing in three different areas of the world in the 1990s.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
in the first Linking Words
chart
, over-grazing animals is the biggest reason Use synonyms
make
Wrong verb form
making
agricultural
become worse, Replace the word
agriculture
following
that deforestation and over-cultivation. Wrong verb form
followed
The
Change preposition
In the
second
Linking Words
chart
, Europe was Use synonyms
an
area that has affected the highest and North America is the lowest.
In the first Correct article usage
the
chart
, the proportion of Use synonyms
land
degraded Use synonyms
due to
having too many animals feeding on it is the highest Linking Words
with
35%, compared Change preposition
at
deforestation
and Change preposition
to deforestation
overcultivation
were 30% and 28%, respectively. The percentage of other Correct your spelling
over-cultivation
cause
is 7%.
In the Fix the agreement mistake
causes
second
Linking Words
chart
, Europe is the area where the highest total Use synonyms
land
degraded is 23%, Use synonyms
while
the figure for North America and Oceania were 5% and 13%, respectively.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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